Well Zapper you helped me with my writing so I thought I would help you with yours. This is what I call a real First Person account. You instructed me to stretch the story out so when he cums your stuck. You said also for a story to be better there has to be problems and struggles. So for the struggle I made your new body feel erotic pleasure 10X greater than an average woman and the problem is every time you orgasm you change a little more into a submissive 18 year old dumb bimbo.